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    Day3 你认为现在的人所吃的食物比几十年前的更健康么?

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    From my perspective, I think eating healthy food is more difficult than before.

    Firstly, Our daily schedules are filled with classes or meetings. And we all know about the risk of eating junk food, for example, overheated food will certainly lead to obesity. The food we eat today contains much unhealthy fat, such as trans-fat. However, people still rush into KFC and McDonald’s to grab a bite in order to keep their timetable, which is inevitable.

    Secondly, the development of modern agriculture produced numerous unhealthy food. And because of the constant usage of fertilizers and preservatives,people who ate those crops will also accumulate toxic chemicals in their bodies。
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    Steve讲解秀:

    1.就如第一次课所说,所讲的内容要well-developed,怎样才算well-developed呢?
    Steve给你一个三步展开法,轻松解决!

    一,是什么?
    就是你的论点。(如我的回答中的,第一论点:人们的生活越来越忙,所以吃的不健康。)
    二,为什么?
    用流程图的思维方式解释你的“是什么”(如我的回答中,第一论点的流程:人们知道食物健康的重要性→但是为了赶上计划没有时间→所以即便想吃好的也只能去快餐店狼吞虎咽)
    三,你看!
    诺,你看!这些是我给的具体例子~前两部相信大家都能顺利展开,但是例子部分却不太重视。但是考官喜欢听的是细节,例子,想要well-developed,这一点很关键。(比如我的第一观点中举到的麦当劳,KFC,第二观点中的化肥和杀虫剂,都属于具体的例子和细节,也是达到convincing的关键部分。)

    3.Trans fat,相信大家都不陌生,这是很多食品商业广告的一个噱头。说我们的食品0脂肪,其实下面的小字部分写的是,“0反式脂肪”。反式脂肪的英文,就是这个啦~

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